Escape the Toxin - Page 12

(Gah, I get so distracted amidst my responses sometimes. x.x' I forgot to resume this.)

Ahah, wow, I wasn't expecting the abrupt influx of comic page submissions, but I daresay that it was soundly a means to keep me entertained, rather than clutching my hair or writhing on the ground from the pain of the cliffhangers. XD I didn't want to be repetitive about the comments, ergo decided to write my compiled opinion here, but that recent flood of pages.... o.o Wow! Utterly mindblown! Not just at the artistry of the panels, but for everything that had transpired! The chase, as predictably uncomfortable a debacle as it was, had me gripped with dismay at Raidar's dire circumstances, wracking me with the suspense of wondering if he would be alright (The part where he was grappled at the neck and lacerated particularly), and then the part where Raidar adopts an entirely different facet of his personality... -Shakes my head in admiration and stupefaction- I've got to say, it was utterly astounding, not to mention epic, to see the normally timid, childishly naive and innocuous hatchling surrender to such a primal and overpowering rage. I was astonished such raw combative potential came from he alone, and I think he would have the capacity to prove a warrior of measurable aptitude. O_O Still, recalling back on the snippet's you've imparted, it surprises me to see this scene, as opposed to his little episode on domestic matters. (Gah, I still feel sorry for him from back then. o___o ) And the pages, all in all, are beautifully sketched. The poses and angles are dynamic, especially in the panel on... page nine, I think? Where he exhaled a jet of flames at his opponent through first-person. You have a veritably gifted understanding in perspective as well, and again, I compliment the same panel in question, as well as page ten. The expressions are nice and vivid, too, the rage, fear, anguish and dismay throughout the panels relatively evident, and the angles at times for such would only further improve the expertise of managing the expressions. Overall, the pages are impressive, and the plot, however basic in this comic it may be, really seems to link up with the story. The idea alone that Chaos had devised that ambush gave it the impression of a sense of ominous foreshadowing... If I had to choose between any of the pages you posted, I honestly couldn't pick favourites. They're all good. ^_^ Keep up the great work!